Posts Tagged ‘Writing’

Writing a comparison paper tips

Sunday, May 16th, 2010

Several times I’ve been asked the question about what goes into a comparison paper, so I thought I’d give a few tips about things that are often overlooked.

Whether you are writing a paragraph, a short essay, a longer report or even an extensive research paper, you can use the following tips to get more ideas for what to write about in your paper and for the general structure.

First you need to set up clearly what you are comparing. Give some background information on the topic in general and then at least briefly give the background and explanation of the key points you are comparing.  You might need more in depth history or background depending on the topic or scope and length of the essay or paper.

You should include the things the topics have in common, and then you need to discuss what that means, or what at least can be inferred from those similarities. You should have at least 3 points of similar comparison even in a relatively short essay.

You then need to consider what are the differences. Then dive into why those things are different. Base these comments on facts you have uncovered in your research or from your own experience if you are qualified to comment on that part. Spend a little time considering the reasons that these differences appear.

When you are only comparing 2 things, it can be difficult to draw really concrete conclusions since you really have little to base your outcomes on. Sometimes it can be helpful then to bring in some other examples that either are similar or different from your two key comparison models or topics.

That is, if you are comparing something like marriage ages in Japan and America, you can show how those differ, but you can also show how one or the other fits in with several other countries or is radically different. What makes it so?

Remember that in order to get more to write about you can always ask yourself, then answer in your writing, the ‘what’ and ‘why’ questions.

You can also consider historical data on both sides. How were these things in the past? How are they now? What appears to be the main reasons for those? What has affected the differences? What effect has that had?

Your inferences and conclusions should then be included in the concluding statements, paragraphs or sections of your paper.

What makes good writing?

Tuesday, April 27th, 2010

Something I have been trying to get a better handle on lately, especially with my writing students, is the idea of what it really takes to make good writing.

I have a sort of credo, though I call it Professor Williams’ Law of good writing in class, hehheh, that goes like this:

Good writing is always specific.

Now, it does come with the warning that specific has to be related, and support the topic.

Think about the stories, movies, essays that you really enjoy.
Those are usually ones where the details are very clear, the more (related) information that’s available, the more you like the writing, dont’ you?

If the story was simply:

There was a big boat. It had many people on it. It hit something. It sank. Many people died. Some people lived.

You wouldn’t find that interesting, would you?
Yet, once we know the name of the ship, the Titanic, and the names of some of those on board, the details of why the voyage was seen to be as one of importance, the facts that the ship sailed without being prepared to handle pretty much any disaster, much less a catastrophic one, and that it hit an iceberg, and that other ships were nearby but unable to give assistance quickly enough, the story is much more interesting.

Millions of people watched this story in movie form, even though they knew the ending. Why? To get those details.

If we didn’t need details, we’d only get which team one the game instead of the scores, the box scores, the recaps, and these days on most major sports you can even get a digest version of the play by play. We don’t read the sports pages for the scores alone; we want the story, in detail.

Of course, there’s more to it than just providing details, but it’s a big step on the way to creating good writing. Try it. I’m sure your readers will like it, and you’ll enjoy the writing more.